Awesome! I like all the levitated water. Cause it actually looks like water. Great range of tone too. I recommend you finish this one with a background. Superb stuff!

Amazing, so much tone. Excellent use of lighting and reflection.

Miku knows what she's talking about. Her "right" boob looks odd with the jacket. In comparison with the left, it looks a bit irregular, I know clothes aren't always symmetrical but I don't think that fits like that. The eye seems too flat, it's a all dark, gotta have some light in there too. Hands should be half way down the thigh too. If it's proportioned correctly, I think it would be at her bum right now. Nice font btw!

Well you already know what's wrong with your drawing. If you know you need work on eyes, face, arms, hands etc. Go work on it then. But it's not so bad for a one minute sketch. As dragon said, good luck!

Kyo and Terry isn't erally that important in this series, so the mix of characters are okay. Good attempt though.

Sweet scan! Kyo's left alone around all the orochi

Luise Meyrink. Good background, fits well with the character. Well done.

I agree with studio, create the shape of the jawline with some shading. It's rather flat. The eye is a bit flat though, it looks like its facing forward, you need a bit shading around there to make it look like its curved around the face. Good to see you again, GJ

The season of new life ^^ Great timing, I found new life I love the golden hair but I reckon the purple coloured leaves looks a bit like autumn to me. Probably cause those are rare here in Sheep-Land! Nevertheless another outstanding work!

I love the details and background. I love the shine of metals. Great Doujin!

Haha nice she's got one of those limestone necklaces. The lyrics by the outlines fits great! Awesome vector too!

Lol, emo girls are awesome! I like the idea and the shoes. But I reckon her arms are pretty short eh?

I usually don't like gundam but this just gives a whole new meaning to it. I love the shine on the metal.

Haha, been over half a year to submit this. I like the hair, the character blends in well with the background, good stuff. The sky gradient is awesome too!

Lol a dude on the wall. I like the blurry effect and the colour is nice too but it made me chuckle. She's a ginger. :P Love the bandage thingie. Good stuff!

Haha, no the left arm is fine since you don't use shadows to show it comes out but anyway, the right leg disappears after the left goes over it :P Looks rather awkward like that. And again, good work on the hair.

Your characters all share the same principals! Big boobs and great poses! I like the clothing too! Great style esp with the mixture of right and left. And ofcourse the guitar! Love the acoustic however I can say that the strap is supposed to be higher up closer to the neck of the guitar.

The title is great but It'd be better if it was larger. I like how the hair and the wing is. Good work!

Woah! Ahhh! A face! Good use of tones and beautiful composition!

Lol, it's a good start. I don't get why you made so much gap on the left though o.o
And uhm, if the light is coming from the right (since the hair on the left is shaded) then the hair in front of her should be light on the right and darker to the left.

As a lineart this would look good. But if you add shading, I reckon you'd need a lot more tones. Cause here, there are: white, grey and darker grey. And with only 3 tones you don't get the blend(gradient) effect.

Wow, this one has really nice depth. I like the eyes most. I just think forest girls shouldn't be wearing gold :P

Hoho, good character design, and the pose But the girl looks super tiny compared to the guy. The girl's leg is as thick as the guy's arm o.O

Humm, I think the arm is too small, the head is out of shape and the back shouldn't be able to bend that far AND twist. Good use of colours though.